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Am up to Stuff...'s avatar

Wow....I'd not expected that change in direction in storyline!

Tony McNichol's avatar

Thanks for reading, my friend!

Ozarklore's avatar

God, I'm gonna be dreaming about my teeth falling out now. Lol. Thank you.

Tony McNichol's avatar

Sorry about that! lol…(teeth are just the worst, aren’t they?)

Hellish Views - Harry Evans's avatar

What a wild tale. As usual, descriptive gold and a great twist.

Tony McNichol's avatar

Thanks, Harry…I really appreciate that feedback!

richard's avatar

Genuinely horrific and funny at the same time,very visual! A fine little terrifying little tale...

Alicia's avatar

I love how this started out as a potentially devastating and gruesome body horror and then gently, lovingly morphed into a beautiful story of redemption. Amazing story, Tony!! I have never read anything quite like this, and it's great.

Tony McNichol's avatar

Wow…that means the world to me; thanks so much, Alicia…high praise from a writer such as yourself!

Alicia's avatar

❤️🙏🏾❤️